Hi, Dr. Ackerman. I stopped by from Dr. Swanson's Seattle Mama Doc blog. After reading through the blog, I have to say that my overall impression is that it is very well written, but I am not sure if your intended audience is parents and patients or medical colleagues (or perhaps both?). As it is written now, it seems more as if it is aimed at your colleagues. It is not that the language is too complex, but more just the overall tone. Most likely, you are just very clinical after your many years in the medical field!